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1Maxil Who my Doctor who fan spinoff! Empty Maxil Who my Doctor who fan spinoff! on Wed May 29, 2019 9:04 pm

Doctor7


I am working on a Doctor Who fan spinoff called Maxil Who . here are excerpts from the script so far!Maxil Who The Clappers of death
Written By David Rosenthal
This film is set in a alternate timeline .
This film is not for profit only for fun .
Doctor Who is a copyright of The BBC.
Maxil wanted to leave Gallifrey he was tired of being a TimeLord chancellery Guard Captain.
Maxil: I want to leave Gallifrey, i am tired of being on Gallifrey I want adventure. he whispers i need to find a TARDIS that will suit me.
Maxil finds a Type 55 TARDIS
Maxil : Ah yes this will work . A type 55 TARDIS.
He finds the key and opens the doors of the TARDIS .
Maxil: Nice console Room ,Very spacious a very nice type 55 TARDIS.
he finds the button to dematerialize the TARDIS
Intercom Voice: Unauthorized use of a TARDIS alert ! alert! Alert!
All Chancellery Guard come to The TARDIS area. A TARDIS has been taken.
The TARDIS dematerializes

Maxil: Well i am free from Gallifrey, now where shall I go for my first adventure? Somewhere exciting I hope.
The TARDIS gets fired upon by beams.
Maxil: What now! I am being fired upon by who?
I might have to crash land.All right old girl hold tight ! The tardis keeps getting fired upon and crashlands.
After the TARDIS crash lands Maxil is a bit worn from the experience.
Maxil: I might have to regenerate. I feel very weak after this crash landing.
Maxil grows weak and falls to the floor.
Maxil face turns into a blur a blue light follows his face changes his nose begins to become more pointy,Hair becomes longer and wavy.
Maxil gets up.
Maxil: So I have regenerated, I wonder what i look like What a way to land !
He gets a mirror.
My nose is certainly more pointy a bit of a nobility to it. The nose reminds me of someone, this face i wonder my accent is a bit different then before .
. Now I need to get better clothes on.
He picks out a blue shirt and a blue jacket and a hat .
I think this will work. Maxil starts feeling odd
. Very odd I feel a bit of vertigo probably a after regenerative side effect. Oh dear, the chameleon circuit is broken after the crash . I will have to go somewhere to find a part to repair it. Now I wonder What is outside?
He checks the scanner.
Purple and green trees interesting ! Planet Alexios is the name of this planet.Well i shall go outside for a look.I want to look around, investigate this unique planet.
Maxil goes outside the TARDIS doors he sees a bit of the battered look of the TARDIS exterior it looks like a battered green shed.
Maxil :Well ,my tardis went through a bit of damage caused by the crash landing a pity but she is tough.
Maxil sees two people by a spaceship.
Maxil : Hello I am Maxil what are your names?
The man replies.my name is Captain Theodore Gellis of the spaceship Georgetown.this is Commander Ella .
commander Ella: Hello where are you from?

We are from the earth colony of Telarus.
Maxil: I come from the planet called Gallifrey I am a Time Lord.
Captain Gellis: A timelord very fascinating,we are sorry we fired upon your craft we thought you were the clappers.
Maxil It is all right I had to regenerate but you did not know,who i was,who are these Clappers?.
Ella: They scavenge planets, take what they can get their hands on, clap their hands and kill..
Maxil : Very fascinating so you want my help do you ?

2Maxil Who my Doctor who fan spinoff! Empty Re: Maxil Who my Doctor who fan spinoff! on Wed May 29, 2019 9:05 pm

Doctor7


Maxil Who The Clappers of death
Written By David Rosenthal
This film is set in a alternate timeline .
This film is not for profit only for fun .
Doctor Who is a copyright of The BBC.
Maxil wanted to leave Gallifrey he was tired of being a TimeLord chancellery Guard Captain.
Maxil: I want to leave Gallifrey, i am tired of being on Gallifrey I want adventure. he whispers i need to find a TARDIS that will suit me.
Maxil finds a Type 55 TARDIS
Maxil : Ah yes this will work . A type 55 TARDIS.
He finds the key and opens the doors of the TARDIS .
Maxil: Nice console Room ,Very spacious a very nice type 55 TARDIS.
he finds the button to dematerialize the TARDIS
Intercom Voice: Unauthorized use of a TARDIS alert ! alert! Alert!
All Chancellery Guard come to The TARDIS area. A TARDIS has been taken.
The TARDIS dematerializes

Maxil: Well i am free from Gallifrey, now where shall I go for my first adventure? Somewhere exciting I hope.
The TARDIS gets fired upon by beams.
Maxil: What now! I am being fired upon by who?
I might have to crash land.All right old girl hold tight ! The tardis keeps getting fired upon and crashlands.
After the TARDIS crash lands Maxil is a bit worn from the experience.
Maxil: I might have to regenerate. I feel very weak after this crash landing.
Maxil grows weak and falls to the floor.
Maxil face turns into a blur a blue light follows his face changes his nose begins to become more pointy,Hair becomes longer and wavy.
Maxil gets up.
Maxil: So I have regenerated, I wonder what i look like What a way to land !
He gets a mirror.
My nose is certainly more pointy a bit of a nobility to it. The nose reminds me of someone, this face i wonder my accent is a bit different then before .
. Now I need to get better clothes on.
He picks out a blue shirt and a blue jacket and a hat .
I think this will work. Maxil starts feeling odd
. Very odd I feel a bit of vertigo probably a after regenerative side effect. Oh dear, the chameleon circuit is broken after the crash . I will have to go somewhere to find a part to repair it. Now I wonder What is outside?
He checks the scanner.
Purple and green trees interesting ! Planet Alexios is the name of this planet.Well i shall go outside for a look.I want to look around, investigate this unique planet.
Maxil goes outside the TARDIS doors he sees a bit of the battered look of the TARDIS exterior it looks like a battered green shed.
Maxil :Well ,my tardis went through a bit of damage caused by the crash landing a pity but she is tough.
Maxil sees two people by a spaceship.
Maxil : Hello I am Maxil what are your names?
The man replies.my name is Captain Theodore Gellis of the spaceship Georgetown.this is Commander Ella .
commander Ella: Hello where are you from?

We are from the earth colony of Telarus.
Maxil: I come from the planet called Gallifrey I am a Time Lord.
Captain Gellis: A timelord very fascinating,we are sorry we fired upon your craft we thought you were the clappers.
Maxil It is all right I had to regenerate but you did not know,who i was,who are these Clappers?.
Ella: They scavenge planets, take what they can get their hands on, clap their hands and kill..
Maxil : Very fascinating so you want my help do you ?
Captain : yes we do have heard of time lords . we need your expertise,
Maxil : All right I will help you first we have to figure how they get their clapping killing abilities, we need to see them in action.
Ella: you are not serious.
Maxil: I am it is the only way to figure out how they kill .
Captain :I think he is right let’s go shall we..
Ella: yes sir ..
Maxil : If only my cousin the doctor was here he could help me. I was under orders to stun him i regretted having to do that.
They head toward a forest area where Clappers usually appear.
Captain : this is where they usually appear at this location..
Maxil : Thank you now we wait.
Some clappers appear in blue and red hoods
Burst of electric blue and red come out of their clapps
Maxil: Ok when i say, run we run right run .
Maxil ,ella and the captain run into the TARDIS.
Captain: That was a close call.
Maxil: Yes it was, but we are safe in my TARDIS.
I think i may have figured out how they get their clapping abilities they have a ring on their fingers that they use now if i can stop the energy pulsating from their rings they can no longer clap and kill.
Captain: Splendid a brilliant idea.
Ella:Sorry to disappoint you but I work for the Clappers .
Captain: How is that possible ?
Ella; When you were asleep, i secretly went outside and talked with them.
I made a deal with them that they could have your ship but i think maxil’s ship is even worth more. A Timelord TARDIS would be the worthy treasure.
Maxil: You cannot have my TARDIS, you do not know how to operate her i would have to show you.




Ella: Show me or i shall use the clappers on you!
Maxil: Allright as you wish.
Maxil, and Ella head into the TARDIS the clappers from behind a tree come forward and head in as well.
Maxil: This operates the door this lever right here the red one.
He points to a red lever.
Ella; Ok and what else?
Maxil: This one is the takeoff button that blue one
He points to it.
He grabs a device from his pocket. And it makes them frozen and stuck.
Maxil: Now i would like some more answers especially from the clappers.
Why do you scavenge and use your clapping ability.
Clapper: Our master commands us.
Maxil: And who is your master? Hmm.
Clapper: His name is Althurious.

Maxil: Where is he?
He communicates via our communication small viewscreen
He likes the hunt for treasure.
I would like to speak with him.
The clapper gives him his device.
Maxil: Hello this is Maxil to Althurious no more killing with your claps not on my watch.
Althurious: You do not intimidate me.
Maxil: Oh no it does not well i am also a Time Lord and a relative of the one known as The Doctor.
Althrious: i thought you had a Time Lord vibe. I will not comply with you.
Maxil: you had better i have a clapper frozen in a force field. Along with the human traitor Ella you had better stop now or they will never be returned to you. Stop this now . I am not bluffing either i mean what i say.
Althurious:





3Maxil Who my Doctor who fan spinoff! Empty Re: Maxil Who my Doctor who fan spinoff! on Wed May 29, 2019 9:12 pm

Tanmann

Tanmann
I've written a Time War fanfiction that featured Maxil.

Unfortunately I killed him off quite early on, which in hindsight I really regret because I could've used a character like him a lot more.

4Maxil Who my Doctor who fan spinoff! Empty Re: Maxil Who my Doctor who fan spinoff! on Wed May 29, 2019 9:16 pm

Doctor7


That is too bad you should not have killed him off !

5Maxil Who my Doctor who fan spinoff! Empty Re: Maxil Who my Doctor who fan spinoff! on Wed May 29, 2019 10:16 pm

Doctor7


In this it is a laying down regeneration more like the classic series not like nu who !

7Maxil Who my Doctor who fan spinoff! Empty Re: Maxil Who my Doctor who fan spinoff! on Thu May 30, 2019 9:46 pm

Doctor7


Here it with bold and italics in the link.

8Maxil Who my Doctor who fan spinoff! Empty Re: Maxil Who my Doctor who fan spinoff! on Sun Jun 09, 2019 12:44 pm

Pepsi Maxil

Pepsi Maxil
Chief Caretaker
Good stuff. I like your writing style and the Maxil characterization is interesting.

9Maxil Who my Doctor who fan spinoff! Empty Re: Maxil Who my Doctor who fan spinoff! on Sun Jun 09, 2019 5:58 pm

Doctor7


Thanks Maxil I was adding a bit of a seventh doctor vibe towards the end where Maxil is not bluffing.

10Maxil Who my Doctor who fan spinoff! Empty Re: Maxil Who my Doctor who fan spinoff! on Tue Aug 27, 2019 3:01 am

Doctor7


Building the tardis and painting in a month or two . still casting some characters.

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