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1 Bottom Series 4 on Sun Mar 12, 2017 10:35 pm

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I know where I want the episode to go but I got stuck on how to get it there, which is why I never posted it when I said I would. Maybe you can share your thoughts on how it is so far and I can go back and figure it out.

Read the script here.

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2 Re: Bottom Series 4 on Mon Mar 13, 2017 10:36 am

That's really good so far. You have a great grasp of the show's mania and fenetic energy. I even read some of it aloud in a very bad Mayall impersonation Surprised

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3 Re: Bottom Series 4 on Mon Mar 13, 2017 11:12 am

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Here's an image I did in photoshop trying to make photos look more like drawings. I thought I could use that method to cheat in making the comic but it doesn't work at all with the low-res, darker screenshots from the show.

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4 Re: Bottom Series 4 on Mon Mar 13, 2017 3:12 pm

Quite good so far, but I may be being thick here but this bit:

Richie starts walking to the door.
EDDIE (O.S.)
Aargh!
Eddie bursts into the room, almost hitting Richie with the
door.
EDDIE (CONT’D)
(shouting)
The door is stuck. The bloody door
is bloody stuck.

These are two different doors, right? I am just having a bit of trouble visualizing it. Obviously, the one blocked with snow is the front door and the other isn't. Also, why does Eddie 'almost' hit Richie with the door? Passing up the chance of slapstick or a fight seems a bit odd to me or are you building up to that?. Just my tuppence.

Apart from that, though, I agree with Zarius that you have captured the feel of it very well.

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5 Re: Bottom Series 4 on Mon Mar 13, 2017 3:25 pm

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Yeah they were different doors. The flat has the two doors that lead to the hallway which has another door to the stairs (IT'S THE GAS MAN!) and then whatever door it that lets them get outside.

So Eddie ran all the way down to the front door while Richie was delivering a monologue then returned and nearly hit him with one of the two doors near the coat stand.

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